Most people like watching movie or reading a good book. There are two types of watching style: one is watching movie or reading a book once and second, watching movie or reading a book twice. I agree that it is more interesting to read a good book or watch a good movie the second time than the first. I have two reasons for this essay.
To begin with, there are some important things that we might missed on the first time we watch or read. If you watch a movie first time, sometimes there are essential part of the scene that you did not see. After watching it on the second time, you will catch this good part and you will feel amazed. For example, when I always read a book or watch movie urgently, I missed some part. I watched Avengers: Endgame three times.
Among the scenes Hulk snapped the finger and put on the Infinity Gauntlet. However, the villains came to the past so they destroyed everything. That time I did not understand how the villains came to the past? Later, when I watched it second time, I knew how the villains arrived.
Additionally, If you watch movie two times you can understand it better. As I said before, I watched Avengers: Endgame three times. I can understand more easily and my knowledge of the movie has increased.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is more interesting to read a good book or watch a good movie the second time so that you will not missed the important parts and understand more the movie or book.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...movie or reading a book once and second, watching movie or reading a book twice. ...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seconds'?
Suggestion: seconds
...e to the past? Later, when I watched it second time, I knew how the villains arrived. ...
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Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...h movie two times you can understand it better. As I said before, I watched Avengers: ...
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Line 8, column 143, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
...ie the second time so that you will not missed the important parts and understand more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44649446494 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3588198301 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431734317343 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3659083534 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8823529412 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33527031914 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127041447963 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138270557309 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213985365849 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124633819002 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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