Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to succeed at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some individuals that homework must not be provided regularly to pupils, whilst their counterparts assert that it should be given on a regular basis to make them successful and to perform better at school. In my opinion, I believe that, while homework is essential for the studies, but it must not be tedious to complete.
To begin with, there are two main reasons why schoolwork should be excluded. First and foremost, it always put an extra burden on the student. To be more specific, children have a limited time after returning from school, which is insufficient for them to study all subjects. Owing to this, they have to make an extra effort to complete the work and consequently become a bookworm. Scholars of India for instance, have been enrolled in different tuition classes by their parents, for additional study on weaker subject areas, which subsequently adds pressure on their minds. Moreover, they could not manage their time well, to engage themselves in outdoor activities. Hence, it will impact negatively on their health as well as relationships with peers and family.
However, homework is beneficial for the wholesome development of students. Firstly, they will stay connected with their syllabus. The regular homework can not only improve the performance in class but also help in revision for exams. Secondly, daily schoolwork sometimes included in final grades, which will be efficient for pupils. For illustration, some home assignments are included in the internal assessment of a student, which will eventually improve their grade points in final examinations. Nevertheless, the practice of giving everyday homework to students has some undeniable benefits.
It is my considered opinion that home assignments play a pivotal role in studies. Therefore, homework should be given daily but according to the student's capacity to accomplish it.
To conclude, although homework is important for better performance in school, yet it should be given as per their needs so that it cannot be stressful for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88230714059 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.342278407 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203328192712 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672388413441 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662376296138 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137811749469 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755327983505 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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