More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in
a foreign country.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
The number of students opting to pursue tertiary education in foreign land have been increasing for last many years. If asked, I strongly opine that the idea to study out of the country would bring more drawbacks as compared to any benefit it might bring.
To begin with, the foremost negative aspect of this is wastage of money. Because of high education cost in alien territories, it becomes inevitable to pay hefty fees for studying over there for the same course, which can be done in mother land. For instance, it costed 4.5 lakh rupees to my brother for accomplishing the engineering course in India and for me it was rupees 45 lakh in Australia, which is 10 times more.
In addition, it has negative consequences on the social life. Since the learners visiting foreign nation for education lose regular contact for a prolong period, the relations with family and friends goes on vanishing gradually. They, therefore, will lose the bonding with them and would not be able to establish new relations. Hence, they have to compromise in many certain cases if they prefer to study abroad.
However, the enhancement in the chances of migration in other country could be an minor advantage. With the opportunity of getting degree on a non-native land, it improves the chance of receiving citizenship in that country. For example, American government always prioritize the application of candidate who had obtained certain course in their country at the time of application.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that squander of wealth and deterioration of societal relations while studying in foreign countries clearly outweigh the positive aspect of improved chances of settlement over there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...se in India and for me it was rupees 45 lakh in Australia, which is 10 times more. ...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... for education lose regular contact for a prolong period, the relations with family and f...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of migration in other country could be an minor advantage. With the opportunity o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18411552347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77555118773 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0251407465 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162581333554 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485297636368 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534420726101 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897294650775 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557940823312 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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