People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Emotion is one of the most complex component that lies within the every living organism-including human being.Emotion is driven by many forces such as feeling,situation,circumstances etc.People make the decision by two way-either by intellectual way or by emotional way.The given recommendation states that people who make decision based on emotion and verified those decisions with logic afterwards are weak decision makers.The given recommendation is highly contentious because different people may have different views.Personally I believe that mostly the decision that are perform based on emotion and explain those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers due the following reason mention below.
Firstly, emotion based decision are oftenly done with the involved of the feeling. Due to this reason, this may leads to create the partiality in the society.For instance, if the judge of the court do the decision based on emotion then it is likely to create the unjudicial activities: that ultimately result in the baised activities. Thus, it is necessary to take the decisions that is free from the emotion.
Secondly, the decision that are done with the involvement of the intelectual power is more fair and reasionable.The decision which are free from emotion: based on cerebal are more logical and effective. For instance.those who use their mind for their career building decision are more likely to achieve their goal; the whose decision is based solely on the emotion.Moreover, emotional decision are not logically: it is very unsuitable to justified with logic afterward the decision is made.
Howeve, some of the decision which are founded with the emotional spirit may sometime make great effect and they could e connects with the logic afterward.
To sum, the decision which are based on emotion are mostly unfair, therefore, it is not suitable to justified with logic.However some decision are logical even if they are perform through emotion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4983713355 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35655069008 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495114006515 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.984251641 60.3974514979 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.0 118.986275619 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.375 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.21951772744 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499959104376 0.243740707755 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239968899117 0.0831039109588 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938782571079 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3046871062 0.150359130593 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059913545529 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 14.1392134831 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.