Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, There are challenges in form of climate change, over population and employment and so many in our society and to tackle those issues various efforts have been taken so far by personal level. Nevertheless, The result is not positive. So some people believe that individuals cannot do anything at locally and states or organizations have to step up to make a greater alter. I completely oppose this view and my supports are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, It is the family who plays a vital role in forming a better society. In other words, If parents teach their children regarding moral values, groom well and civilize them could make better civilian in the community. Such active participation from each household will have definitely good village or town and eventually developed nation.
Another belief is that the metropolitan official and organization can draw a road map or enforce rules, laws can be successful only active involvement of dwellers. What i mean by that no matter what investment, planning or rules enforced, It will not be fruitful until companion by common people. For instance, "Clean India Green India" movement was ran by an Indian government failed due to fewer joined this campaign of the country.
In conclusion, There are more difficulties around the society and required urgent attention to solve earliest. Despite municipal officials and management assignment to minimize this, It is highly recommended that should be way forward personal level to positive change in the society to make easy for everyone.
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- Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87629076174 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712598425197 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7185643777 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131916249928 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354341766994 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437276894854 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615210981451 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455808746086 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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