Combating between two genders, men and women is the most contrivercial topic nowdays. Even though every indivioule has his/her own tendency to be competitive, there are still some crowd who discriment women abilities beside men by saying such such thing. I personlly don't agree to such statement. Because it is a mutiule human feeling and every gender is equal.
Everyone has the aruge to compet with others who may show attracting ability or skill. It is a human diseave which may push people to move forwards. In work environment, school, and 3ven relashionship. Women and men beheave closely the same, in my point of view.
Equality related studies has showed that tendency to battle between the two genders are equal, more so the combiand it with an anther cognitive skills behaviral study in kids in kinder garden.they found out that every gender showed frantc level of achiviment. Which means no of diffence in the both resatle.
Overall, men and women are competitive in the same level because it is a humen nutre.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99418604651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6303433345 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.8149584754 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141371714621 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509388174885 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492453282772 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089855487234 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490844672298 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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