In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses
to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Authorities in certain nations are motivating entrepreneurs to shift their factories and other businesses in various rural areas beyond the margin of metropolitan region. If asked, I strongly opine that the benefits of such trend attracts more benefits compared to any problem it might result.
To begin with, the foremost positive aspect of this trend would enhancement in the health of locals. Migrating companies to pastoral areas will control the seepage of chemical water into the ground, human beings can drink pure water. For instance, the health department of Delhi were able to control around 85% of water-borne diseases after migrating the chemical industries beyond the ring road.
In addition, it might also mitigate environmental pollution. Since the toxic gases emitted from those manufacturing units slumps, humans can enjoy the fresh atmosphere for inhaling. Shifting of textile mills, for example, from the central part of Ahmedabad has alleviated 50% of emission of carbon dioxide. This has been one of the reason for reduction of overall temperature of the city.
However, such trend might cause increase in the transportation cost of individuals. If the business premises has been located on the far end of the urban areas, not only the work force but also the entrepreneurs have to travel long distances to reach over there. This will be, ultimately, increasing the cost of transport. But the central can stimulate public transportation system to cut the fare of travellers.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that improvement in the human health and it’s surrounding by government policies fostering industrial and business hub on the outer parts of the megacity outweigh the negative aspect of rise in the cost of travelling to reach there.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88617172824 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.264516538 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100358435213 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309019468102 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027421641046 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051800312258 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228395424422 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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