Fossil fuels (oil, coal and natural gas) are the main sources in many countries but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged.
To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Some nations are being utilised the renewable sources to met their energy demands; whereas, majority nations are still rely on the conventional energy sources such as coal, oil and gas. In my opinion using wind and solar energy to meet requirement by countries is a positive step as it is environment friendly and abundantly available.
Non-renewable sources such as fossil fuels are known for its detrimental effect on the environment. When utilizing these sources they emit carbon in the atmosphere making it polluted. Climate changes occur due to this reason. In contrast, the wind and solar energies are greener to our planet. They do not emit any by-products which are harmful to atmosphere. For example, a recent report statistics from Solar Alliance shows that India lowered its carbon emission level around 20% by replacing thermal power plants to solar power plants across the country.
Apart from being harmful to the environment the conventional sources are available in limited amount. Their reservoir in the earth will surely exhausted one day. Due to this reason their prices are hiking day by day and puts extra pressure on government spending. On the other hand, the eco-friendly renewable energy sources are abundantly available. Countries do not need to rely on the others and they are also freely available, which makes them budget friendly. As per the same report cited previously also shows that India’s step toward cleaner energy reduced it oil and gas import spending by 57% in a fiscal year.
To conclude, step taken by the some nations to use alternative energy sources is a positive development in my opinion. Renewable energy sources are eco-friendly and freely available, which makes them best alternative to coal, oil and gas. I therefore feel that every nation should switch over to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: relied
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'exhaust'
Suggestion: exhaust
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Message: Did you mean 'oils'?
Suggestion: oils
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the best'.
Suggestion: them the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, therefore, whereas, apart from, for example, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22297297297 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71641580213 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4820887438 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331834454367 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983292763162 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892201620263 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219830706379 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876379537374 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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