In today's world more and more people are obsessing about their physical appearances. They invest a lot of time and money on apparels, cosmetics, hairstyles, etc. in order to alter their appearances and look more presentable. In my opinion, it is vital for people to look well maintained.
One of the primary reason is that nowadays people are very judgemental. They judge a books by its cover. In other words, people are quick in assuming about a person purely based on external factors namely, theirs looks and their clothes. Secondly, a well groomed person looks very neat and sharp whereas a person who is not concerned about their physical appearance may look unkempt and sloppy. For instance, when going for a job interview, one needs is expected to be well dressed. Failing to do so may result in not getting the job.
Nonetheless, paying attention to the way you look is very advantageous. To begin with, one is accepted wholeheartedly by society, because people like being associated with a good looking person. Next, grooming implies that the person likes taking care of themselves and puts effort in themselves. Conversely, focus too much on exterior may result in ignoring on what is going on internally. Therefore, striking a balance is important since not taking care of your body may have some serious repercussions in the long run.
To recapitulate, spending time and money, without going overboard, to change and maintain the physical appearance is important as it is the first thing that meets the eyes. Furthermore, the person is welcomed by society for they are perceived as more pleasing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, look, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03731343284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81916751938 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6367183976 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340624069904 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930772244753 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061135802185 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199727412119 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629843695826 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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