Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide my feedback over my recent experience at your hotel. My name is John Doe and I stayed at Holiday Inn, Bangkok for a duration of 2 nights from 2nd August 2018 to 4th August 2018.
After I checked-in to my room, I inserted the room key card into the holder slot as per the instructions given at the reception counter. Later, I noticed that the electricity power was fluctuating, causing me great inconvenience due to the failure of the air conditioning and lights. Therefore, I contacted the reception for help.
Mary, the receptionist was quite attentive to listen and address my problem. Without any further delay she sent a technician to investigate and fix the issue. I would like to express my praise to Mary as she was indeed helpful in a big way to make my stay comfortable.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe</span><br>
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- Company has advertised a vacancy job at major sport event and this job is unpaid job. And the job will start next month. Why would like to work in this job? Ask the the company something that you need to clear up. 73
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation 84
- Some people say that government should break down all the historical buildings and replace them with modern buildings Do you agree or disagree 90
- Some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people. Others think it is having an opposite effect. Discuss these points of view. What is your opinion? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45274462387 2.54303337028 136% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707792207792 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7728116081 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100547940629 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386380193519 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376059912269 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486184465498 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428453172272 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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