Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide my feedback over my recent experience at your hotel. My name is John Doe and I stayed at Holiday Inn, Bangkok for a duration of 2 nights from 2nd August 2018 to 4th August 2018.
After I checked-in to my room, I inserted the room key card into the holder slot as per the instructions given at the reception counter. Later, I noticed that the electricity power was fluctuating, causing me great inconvenience due to the failure of the air conditioning and lights. Therefore, I contacted the reception for help.
Mary, the receptionist was quite attentive to listen and address my problem. Without any further delay she sent a technician to investigate and fix the issue. I would like to express my praise to Mary as she was indeed helpful in a big way to make my stay comfortable.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45274462387 2.54303337028 136% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707792207792 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7728116081 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100547940629 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386380193519 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376059912269 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486184465498 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428453172272 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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