The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The bar graph provides the information about differences in average cinema attendance on the each day of the week in years 2003, 2005 and 2007.
First of all, the average percentage of people going to cinema was by far the highest on Saturdays. Secondly, this number peaked in year 2005 when it was as three times as high as the number of people going to cinemas on Monday. Also, percentage was higher on the days of the weekend than on the working days.
On the other side, Monday was the day when the fewest people went to the movies in 2003. However, in 2007 Wednesday was the day on which the smallest number of people went to cinema. In 2005, percentage of cinema attendants was equal on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays and it was also the lowest on those days.
Average number of people who went out to watch a movie on Friday leveled off in these three years. Even though this percentage was higher in comparison to other working days, it wasn’t as high as percentage of cinema attendance during the weekend.
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- The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. 56
- The charts below give information about the amount spent on different forms of advertising 71
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64480874317 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4211658872 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7476149244 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237158873292 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112891247121 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490672488825 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155683305571 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399047294154 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.