some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. other think parent needn't do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most parents globally have made lots of effort researching to nurture their children’s creativity and knowledge. Although there are lots of conflicting interpretations, this essay will determine the suitable approach for the children in both given arguments.
There are some negative effects on less parental time consumption such as reading books to children and childhood development. First, by choosing a variety of books, which is suitable for people under 12 ages, parents can easily censor the number of content stories before tell to children. In fact, since children who are not efficient cognition, censorship would bring suitable content for children's brain, especially kids in developing stage, which increases children’s cognition. Furthermore, the parents’ role should be defined in the early part of a child’s development, which ensures their child’s cognition. For instance, Vietnamese always educate details for children, which is missions not only their educational institutions but also their families.
The opponent of education may argue that it is too easy for developing children, they have to practice deciding or doing everything which occur in their life, such as watch television, films or read the various books. However, this is not the best suggestion by experts. Children do not know what is the good or bad things, which lead to misunderstand. For example, since watchdogs cannot analyse a range of programs in YouTube or social networking sites, resulting in bad effects to children’s mind, which make distort intellectual ability.
In conclusion, an increasing number of modern country today would not avoid quickly developing children, which compares with several generations ago. Parents can help their kids who live in safety environment more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73431734317 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10938983888 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656826568266 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3162657752 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223284011821 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854752036602 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581867801596 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129765716874 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452658498873 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.