You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner.
In your letter you should say:
• What you enjoyed at the dinner
• Describe how you feel about his/her family
• Invite your friend and his family to your place
Dear Thomas,
I hope you have been doing well. Though it has been just a week since we last met, it seems like it has been a long time. I am writing this letter to express my joy over last week’s dinner that you beautifully arranged for me and I would like to thank you for having me at your place.
There were so many elements about the dinner that I admired. I must say that I heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cosy feeling in this freezing weather, specially, the way the room was lightened up with dim yet glittering lights. The atmosphere you managed to create gave me a homely feeling. The Canadian food was a true delight and the desserts were mouth-watering, quite different from the sort we have in India, which gave us a unique experience. Moreover, I no longer feel like a foreigner now because of your loving gesture and it was an amazing experience for me.
Being an immigrant, I really miss my family parties, as in India I generally mix up more with my near ones. It was nice on your family’s part to mingle so well with me even on our first meet. They were really supportive of the fact that I belong to a very different culture. Infact, they seemed very happy to have me over for the dinner. Hence, I want to express my gratitude to you, as well as your family for giving me such a wonderful time. I am greatly over-whelmed with our friendship and maybe someday we may even go on a vacation together.
Coming to the important part now, I won’t say as matter of returning favours, but I genuinely want you to come and join me and my family for the New Year Eve. We have planned something special and would love you all to have a go at our style of celebrating things. It is going to be a wonderful ride for you guys as you can’t even imagine the kind of evening you are going to have. Apart from that, we will have bonfire for which I have hired a professional, along with some French wine. My aunt from India is coming that day and she is good with cooking. So be prepared for some amazing Indian delicacies and not to forget, long sessions of gossips.
I am eagerly waiting for the day and would love to spend the special night with you and your family. Say my hello to your mom and dad and see you soon.
Best Wishes,
Udita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...at I heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cos...
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Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...s. The atmosphere you managed to create gave me a homely feeling. The Canadian food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 32.9175257732 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 26.3917525773 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 937.175257732 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 436.0 206.0 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36926605505 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43753176512 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 127.690721649 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 290.88556701 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6804123711 189% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2545385833 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.375 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 7.41237113402 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288866576359 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826676086317 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776467376299 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189971380323 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546513619465 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.