Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,many schools are more focused on that subject which are not beneficial in real life. Schools give more focuse on historical subjects to the children which do not help students in real life problems. Following paragraphs says that modern education are important for students but traditional knowledge are also gives knowledge about tradition and history.
To begin with,school are teaching learners about history and social science which does not helpful in practical life. Moreover,in practical life technology is growing much faster in now days. So that,ritual literacy is not useful in that case.For example,in engineering tutors only teach student about old technology that does not help them in practical field.
On the other hand, orthodox subject are also helpfull to know about our tradition and historical c knowledge that helps us to know about other people's tradition and their lifestyles. Moreover,if one country have better life style or better tradition than us,in that case people can learn some good things from them.For instance,more people not know about history which place they live. But traditional illiterate give them precious information.
In conclusion, conventional subject are help people in life. but, neoteric cognizance are also useful to survive in this fast growing universe.
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- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.592039801 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76621389419 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5073054053 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163156178384 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682901467323 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505254937172 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968291848932 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734003290958 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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