The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge. Although, it is believed that the sole responsibility of libraries is to provide conventional printed materials. In my opinion, I strongly agree that with the advancement in technology libraries should include the latest media applications of providing knowledge such as CDs and DVDs.
It is believed that information centres are meant to provide an ambiance and surrounding that motivate people to read books and gain knowledge, the availability of videos and audios will distract the mind of people and the overall objectivity of libraries in increasing understanding will be lost. Moreover, libraries not only have squandering cost and limited resources but also they do not receive any funding from government that aid them in install the latest technology with the availability of squandering cost and limited resources.
Despite some of the few negatives, the idea that installing audio and video devices are useless and do not enhance erudition is completely preposterous. CDs and DVDs do not occupy much of shelf space than the books, furthermore, they help people to gain understanding about the various aspects with the use of graphics and pictures, Additionally, individuals can read novels and books on laptops and computers at the comfort of their homes or while traveling. To elucidate, CDs and DVDs with cartoon videos and songs for children will help them to gain a better understanding which they will remember for their entire life
To conclude, I vehemently agree that libraries should enable them with advanced technology and media applications as this will increase their significance and needs in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...repositories of never-ending knowledge. Although, it is believed that the sole responsib...
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Suggestion: some
...ost and limited resources. Despite some of the few negatives, the idea that installing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they will remember for their entire life To conclude, I vehemently agree that lib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49049429658 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10468788676 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.201889855 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.285714286 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273954553918 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109037178842 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484832778524 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164246989952 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333766658072 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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