The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge. It is true that the sole responsibility of libraries is to provide conventional printed materials. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the advancement in technologies libraries should include the latest media applications of providing knowledge such as CDs and DVDs.
It is believed that libraries are meant to provide an ambiance and surrounding that motivate people to read books and gain knowledge, with the availability of videos and audios will distract the mind of people and the overall objective of the library will be lost. Moreover, the libraries cannot install the latest technology with the availability of squandering cost and limited resources.
Despite some of the few negatives of having the latest technology in libraries, the idea that they are useless and do not enhance eruition is completely preposterous as CDs and DVDs do not occupy much of shelf space than the books. The use of latest media applications like computer software and documentaries will help people to gain the understanding about the various aspects with the use of videos and pictures, and there is a justified verbalization that people tend to remember the videos and images for a longer period rather than mugging up the content from books. Furthermore, individuals can read novels and books on laptops and computers in the comfort of their homes or while traveling and will not be required to carry heavy books. To elucidate, CDs and DVDs with cartoon videos and songs for children will help them to gain a better understanding which they will remember for their entire life
To conclude, I vehemently agree that libraries should enable them with advanced technology and media applications as this will increase their significance and needs in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30689655172 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99467621161 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.737768495 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.375 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261167748572 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105579627603 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497102430298 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164748133745 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363705894506 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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