The pie charts illustrate a comparison for the number of years for people from Yemen and Italy in 2000 and an estimate for 2050.
Overal, the majority of the people in Yemen are between the ages of 0-14years, as above 60 hold a lesser percentage. It is estimated that in 50years time the greast part of the population will comprise of the ages between 15 -59 years, whilst 60 years plus will be marginalised. Further, greater proportion of the people in Italy is composed of able bodied people between 15-59years, while children below 14years occupy the least number. In future it is foreseen that in Italy, the majority of the population will almost consists of both 15-59 and above 60 years, as below 14 will be few.
Highlighted on the chart, half of the population in Yemen comprises of children below the age of 14years, whilst adults above 60years are very few, as they occupy about one tenth. It is projected that in 50 years time, the majority of people will be of children and adults from 15 to 59years, while the 60 years plus remain an isolated number.
Furthermore, the population of Italy in 2000 consists of a greater percentage of 61.6 for able bodied, whilst infants and children below 14, was the minority group. In 2050; despite, children and adults being the majority of the people, at 46.2 percent; 60years plus age group is following closely at 42.3 percent, whereas ages between 0-14 years bears an insignificant number.
It can be clearly seen that, in Yemen the proportion of above 60s remain lower in both given periods, though it increased from 3.6% to 5.7%. There will be a huge decrease in population for children below 14 from 50.1 % to 37%, whilst for children and adults, there will be a fluctuation trend from 46.3% to 57.3%. In Italy, ages of 15-59years remain the majority of the population, as 0-14years remains marginalised. Comparing Yemen and Italy, overally ages between 15-59years has the greatest percentage of the population, while 0-14 years is median and lastly above 60s are marginalised. In Italy the population of below 14 remains relatively low.
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 67
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Government should spend more money on railways than roads.To what extend do you agree or disagree. 73
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'will be composed of' or 'will comprise' or 'will consist of'?
Suggestion: will be composed of; will comprise; will consist of
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consist'
Suggestion: consist
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 33.7804878049 198% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 965.302439024 181% => OK
No of words: 358.0 196.424390244 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87988826816 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64026594489 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432960893855 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 283.868780488 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4644781022 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.785714286 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177205443609 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798677815381 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612596526281 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13306271827 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621609200472 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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