Your son studies a foreign language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking him/her for some help.
-why he needs help?
-ask teacher about his experience and methods.
- suggest a possible schedule for extra lessons.
Dear Mr. shahid,
I am writing this letter to seek a favor regarding to the second language learned by my son Anas Halawala in school curriculum.
With regards to my son’ ability, he lacks the basic knowledge of the English language. From the past week I was assessing him on the level of course completion, to my surprise, he was very poor in grammar and speaking and shows no interest in the language.
I am very much concerned with his English language, as exams are approaching and he is very poor. Although, I am not authorized to question your abilities and competency skills, but would you not mind sharing your total occurrences and methods of teaching this language at school. As this will not only help me to identify the gap but, will also allow me to follow the course layout closely.
Since, it is imperative for the child to pass the exam with high grades; I would like to make some recommendations. Firstly, one daily grammar task lesson at school and one task at home will might develop enthusiasm and drive towards grammar. Secondly, a daily progress report will be an added advantage for all the pupils including my son, as it allows them to track their progress on the course completion.
I hope you will take a closer look into these suggestions and looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Shahid Halawala
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| 2019-12-04 | Shahidhalawala | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...o these suggestions and looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Shahi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64067840441 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9430162361 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150725092794 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524335837354 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210111766459 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729102607408 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299803443249 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.