do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
I am agree with the statement that in order to be well informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. Primarily, I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in following paragraphs.
First of all, every news has its company which is responsible for the news which is being published. Today, many news channels makes money by taking bribe from the political parties, governments, etc. to hide the truth which is not in favour of them. so, it is possible for us to predict the real instances by reading multiple sources related to that specific news. my personal experience is greatt example of this. when the elections was going on in india, then there was many controversies related to the seat of prime minister. every article was presenting an unbalanced views, but finally, the one who was predicted by my father sat in the place of prime minister. I we read many articles, then surely we can analyse and predict the real fact.
Secondly, when it comes to the news related to education, the official statement matters the most. every decision taken by government is officially declared via social networking sites like facebook, twitter, etc. And mostly government posts the exact statement across all the accounts. so, it may result in maximum coverage of people and people can also cross verify by reading those statement in multiple sites. Once, it was raining heavily and all the roads were packed by the flooding of rain and it was a controversy that all the school will have holiday. After some time, the education minister had announced the official statement of holiday. I have checked that on twitter as well as facebook and it was confirmed to me that we are having a day off. To ensure the correctness of controversies, one should get informed from various sources.
In conclusion, The person should be well informed from various sources to avoid the unbalanced information as well as to ensure about the correct information provided on media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much; little
...e news which is being published. Today, many news channels makes money by taking bri...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...e news which is being published. Today, many news channels makes money by taking bribe fr...
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...people can also cross verify by reading those statement in multiple sites. Once, it was raining...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90265486726 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68218005604 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7267467199 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4736842105 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295823195546 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852488864905 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152048179004 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231111860199 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16702165621 0.0645574589148 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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