With the advent of machinery and modern ways of living, requirement of energy resources has flared up in recent decades. This has triggered a debate about digging unexplored land worldwide in search of oil and gas. While there may be other methods which are less harmful to other species, I strongly agree that massive geological work needs to be done under the surface of earth to ensure uninterrupted availability of natural resources to humans.
It could be argued that humans are being selfish and they are exhausting underground resources for their materialistic needs. Since many plants needs natural minerals and nutrients under the earth to grow, excessive digging might lead to detrimental effects on such vegetations. It could also result in soil erosion, loss of land suitable for plantation and deterioration of other living species on earth. For example, due to excessive digging, blue fungi has gone extinct from deep earth and proven a threat to survival of worms, which use it as their nutrition.
However, finding new natural resources is crucial for human progression and this undoubtedly outweighs any disadvantage this practice has to other species. With rapid modernization, machineries are being used to manufacture necessary commodities. Such technology requires massive supply of energy resources and putting experts on finding natural gas and oil in far away places of the world is the only soultion. If this doesnot happen, factories will close down and economy will collapse. Many will become unemployed and masses will be without basic life facilities, hindering the progress of humanity. For example, many factories in China stopped working recently due to unavailability of fuel and led to economic chaos. Moreover, synthesizing feul products is impossible to afford and will not be sustainable owing to the huge demand of current times.
To conclude, growing global demand of energy sources has led to utmost need of working on untouched land in search of natural feul sources. It might have a harmful impact on other lives on earth but humans cannot afford to worry about other species at the cost of their own benefit. Therefore, countries should certainly invest in starting new projects to discover natural resources.
- The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.To what extent do you agree? 89
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as tv, friends and music. Others believe that family still remains very important.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28969359331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80286795562 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593314763231 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2754852779 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.705882353 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113776665706 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369268675344 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326699188226 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070071042637 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317041171323 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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