In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent years many small local shops have been closed because of large shopping malls or centres, this development of super markets and large provisional stores has both advantages and disadvantages.
In a positive way the customers no need to go different shops to purchase the grocories and clothes ,we can find everything in the same place.This helps the customers to save money and time, additionally the consumers can also get huge discounts and coupons on their bills depends up on their amount spent.
Along with that the people are also getting different benefits like reward points, special gifts for the lucky one's who won the lucky draw,special holiday tours with less cost etc.
In a negitive way it affects the small business people in many ways , they can't sell their products at the low cost which the malls offering the people.In long run it affects the small and medium sector on their profits and impact their survival .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17088607595 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50371598829 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70253164557 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3657936976 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.25 76.5299724578 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 16.8248392259 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318011995679 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17618766782 0.0766984524023 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168770286049 0.0603063233224 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17618766782 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168770286049 0.0580467560999 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 8.37731958763 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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