You have received a letter about winning a prize in a competition organised by the media house, but didn’t receive that prize. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper about it and say
– Describe the competition and prize in details.
– How do you feel about it?
– What do you expect the editor to do about it?
Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with the competition which the media house arranged and hosted. The challenge was to name the name of all Iran’s provinces within a minute and it occurred at Pars Hotel in Shiraz on 23/04/2019. I have received a letter that I have won the prize which is a cheque with a value of $1000. They mentioned in the letter that I will receive the cheque at my address on 01/06/2019.
I became very happy and excited and I bought a new car which I needed badly. I do not know what happened, I got nothing whatsoever up to now. It made me very upset and put me in the worst situation I have ever had economically as I have bought a new car based on that hope. Therefore, I have no money left to pay my next rent.
Could you contact the organizer and do a follow-up as you have a close connection with them? I hope with your help I can receive the money and pay my next rent. I highly appreciate your help and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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| 2021-04-07 | adish123 | view | |
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| 2019-12-07 | mohamadi654094 | 87 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | Sorena Eshkoor | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te your help and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you as soo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49246231156 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64806479631 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3882398087 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212487763412 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631738546096 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694695522082 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105506844856 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645974322776 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.