You have received a letter about winning a prize in a competition organised by the media house, but didn’t receive that prize. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper about it and say
– Describe the competition and prize in details.
– How do you feel about it?
– What do you expect the editor to do about it?
Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with the competition which was arranged and hosted by the media house and we have met there. The competition was on who can name all Iran’s province names within a minute and it occurred at Pars Hotel in Shiraz on 23/04/2019.
I have participated in the competition and I won the first prize, but unfortunately, I have not yet received the prize which was a cheque with a value of 1000$. It supposed to be delivered to me at my address on 01/06/2019. It is now 01/07/2019 and I have not got anything yet.
Could you make a contact with the organizer and do a follow up as you have a close connection with them? I hope with your help I can receive this prize as in my current financial situation I need this money to be able to pay my next rent.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-05-23 | arami | view | |
| 2021-04-07 | adish123 | view | |
| 2019-12-07 | Sorena Eshkoor | 87 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | mohamadi654094 | 87 | view |
| 2019-12-07 | Sorena Eshkoor | 87 | view |
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 61
- You have recently bought a Telephone with answer machine from an online shop. The web page said that the answer machine shows you a list of who left a message so you can choose which to play first. But after taking it home you find out that only the most 73
- Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:Say which edition and when did the article appearExplain why you lost contact with your fr 73
- Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter: 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...rize which was a cheque with a value of 1000$. It supposed to be delivered to me at m...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ake a contact with the organizer and do a follow up as you have a close connection with ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61212121212 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76994230065 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.353841301 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234044578274 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805588128466 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754073382812 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120294996908 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415666167943 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.