You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my recently stayed at the Jahan hotel room 301 in Tehran. I spent three miserable nights at your hotel because of damage air condition from June 5-8, 2012.
When I entered to my room because of hot weather, I want to turn on air condition, but it was not turn on. I called to reception and ask them to check it. They send a technical man to my room. He checked air condition and he said that it was burnt and did not work in future. Consequently, I asked supervisor to change my room, but he said that all rooms in hotel were res...
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