Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialised knowledge of the following topic:
A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Universities and colleges are considered to be a supreme citadel for providing education to people. Many citizens agree that colleges should accept both male and female students for imparting education. In my opinion, do believe that universities should not discriminate students as males and female and should give equal opportunities to both the genders in selecting a course.
People have an opinion that universities should give more preference to male students for enrolment than the female students as the boys are considered to be the bread earners whereas girls are supposed to take care of the family and children after their marriage. It is thus mandatory to provide good education and practical experience to males rather than females. Moreover, they believe that boys have more of intellectual thinking and practical mind than females so their knowledge should be enhanced.
However, the universities should give an equal importance to both the males and females students or enrolment in today’s world men and women are treated equally in the society in terms of thinking, memory and knowledge. People believe in women empowerments, in other words girls also have the opportunity to work in big multinational companies and earn handsome salaries. Moreover, parents agree to provide higher and professional education to their daughters so that they can also built a successful future and career. To illustrate, more than 80 percent of the women population is considered illiterate and are working in higher level positions in organizations.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that universities should give equal opportunities to both men and women as they both contribute evenly in the development of the country economically, socially and politically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...o their daughters so that they can also built a successful future and career. To illu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49270072993 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06941900841 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3389321121 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.818181818 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203409404618 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857755399895 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626489345252 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133030171171 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053489620879 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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