Television is dangerous because it destroys family life sense of community; instead of visiting people or taking with our family we just watch television.
To what exact do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
There is no doubt that these days, everybody is used to spend countless hours in front of screen. The question is, are television impactful in our community? In this essay I am going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion.
In terms of advantages, TV could make our life more enjoyable. The main reason given to support this claim is that lots of comedy and interesting programs like cartoons are displayed on these devices, which make us too much engaged in front of TV. To illustrate, tom & jerry cartoon is a very popular funny program showed on television. In other words, lots of children get very happy when they see it. So that is why some people think that television is not such a big problem.
However, TV has clear disadvantages on society. Firstly, a loss communicational skills could happen due to watching TV, in other words, when people tend to just sit in front of screen for hours without talking with others, they will gradually tent to loss their social interaction skills. A resent research shows that teenagers who watch TV more than 2 hours daily suffer from lack of speaking skills in front of people. Secondly, addiction is a common side effect of TVs. This is because people watch them for long hours and still wish for more. For an instance, if I saw one episode of an interesting program, I will wait eagerly for other episodes or other more interesting programs.
In conclusion, although TV may bring little bit of joy in our life, it is still has dangerous effects on people. Therefor, I believe that TVs are very harmful for our social and family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... In conclusion, although TV may bring little bit of joy in our life, it is still has dan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...harmful for our social and family life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70462633452 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58647533046 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6976221226 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136718930208 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446616318947 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387233493432 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823418232795 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322455352151 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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