To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
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The characteristics of a society are an outcome of the conditions surrounding the people of the society, their work life and their culture which means that depending upon the living and the working conditions of a society, the major characteristics are bound to vary from one part of a society to another. Thus one cannot expect to understand the most important characteristics of a society by just studying its major cities. No doubt that the people of the major cities are represented on a larger scale and thus are highlighted as compared to those residing in smaller towns but a shift in the characteristics can be observed when we move from a major city to a smaller town.
The work life of the people in the major cities is quite hectic because the major cities are often more developed than the other cities and small towns which makes the people of major cities more self absorbed, busy and less liable to interact with the people near them like their neighbours and relatives. However the people in the other cities which are not considered the major cities and those in small towns are simpler and they are not so much work enthusiasts as the people in major cities so a shift in the behavior can be observed making people in such smaller cities more interactive with their neighbours and relatives and their work schedule is less hectic than those living in major cities. Such people will then engage more in public life while people in major cities have an active professional life rather than a public life. The culture also varies from major cities to smaller cities so the most important characteristics will also change .
India is one such example where we can see a marked difference in the characteristics of the society from one city to another. The major cities of India include Delhi and Mumbai whose people have more freedom than those in the other cities. The women in such major cities have the freedom to work outside their home while the women in many smaller towns and minor cities are restricted to go out for work and thus remain as mere housewives. The literacy rate is also more in these major cities while the children in various other cities like Uttar Pradesh and Bihar are engaged in child labour and are deprived of education. Moreover, due to heterogenity in the major cities because people from all different areas come to pursue their careers in these cities , the major cities see a mix of various cultures while the other cities and smaller towns have a homogeneous society and hence the culture is same throughout such cities.
It is thus quite evident that by studying the major cities one cannot learn about the most important characteristics of a society. A few characteristics may be similar but the major characretistics will vary because of their different lifestyles and culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82581967213 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64379937502 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.372950819672 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8062806872 60.3974514979 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.214285714 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128428919316 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752680988157 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642893280748 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116241812722 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499338462257 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.