Nowadays many parents are sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend. Give your own opinion.
In this modern era, quality education is very vital for everyone. More parents sending their children to foreign country to learn new culture and improve their world view. Studying abroad gives prestige in their home country. It will give pleasure and excitement for the students when they are study in the new country.
Children would receive standard education in developed country. They will be confident and take it as a challenge to study in new culture and environment. After their education, they will get high pay job and they can settle in that country. They are independent to manage finance as they have to pay their bill. Finally, it would be adventurous when they participate in new activity in foreign country. It is helpful to improve their second language.
Most of the students are face home-sickness as they are missing their beloved family and depression. More money needed for the education fees and living cost during the study which results in debt for the family. Some students will borrow bank loan to pursue their study. Students are distracted by the new culture and environment. They will addict to bad habits like gambling, drugs and alcohol due to misleading friends.
To conclude, studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages. Some students will tackle disadvantages but others who might not able to handle all of that will suffer. Though Prospect live independent and face challenges at young age which will be useful in their life and have a prosperous and enjoyable life. Its disadvantages should be considered by the candidate before leaving their home country.
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More parents sending their children to foreign country
More parents are sending their children to foreign countries
when they are study in the new country.
when they study in the new country.
when they are studying in the new country.
in developed country.
in developed countries.
high pay job
high paid jobs
Most of the students are face home-sickness
Most of the students face home-sickness
Most of the students are facing home-sickness
More money needed for the education fees
More money are needed for the education fees
Though Prospect live independent and face challenges at young age which will be useful in their life and have a prosperous and enjoyable life.
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by the candidate before leaving their home country.
by the candidates before leaving their home countries.
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