You won a competition and received a vacation for two as a prize. Write a letter to ask someone to go on holiday with you.
In the letter, you should:
• tell him/her about the competition you won
• state what kind of vacation it is
• explain why you would like him/her to go with you on the holiday
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to share an exciting news that I won a prize of a vacation for two.
Last week, I participated in the quiz organise by our local Happy club and won the prize of a vacation for one week for two in Singapore. The quiz show was a big event in which there were 100 participants in the beginning and there were 10 rounds. Moreover, it was not easy and the questions were getting tougher and tougher. But I was lucky to won the first prize by clearing all the levels.
I have received a prize for vacation of one week for two people to Singapore. The organisation will bear all the cost of flights, hotels and meals. The package include visit to some of the major tourist attractions such as the Sentosa Beach, Singapore Cruise, Gardens by the Bay, Night Safari, Singapore flyer. One day will be entirely dedicated to shopping.
I hope you will join me ton the vacation as I think you and me will enjoy a lot over there. Moreover, I fell very comfortable staying with you as we have a lot of things in common.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
...time. I am writing this letter to share an exciting news that I won a prize of a vacation for tw...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...and meals. The package include visit to some of the major tourist attractions such as the S...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Take care and see you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, moreover, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40265486726 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41297754794 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8854667881 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1875 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325280634615 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988208342369 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789102738128 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188545657145 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108358440724 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.