The plans below show the layout of a university's sports Center now, and how it will look after development.
The pair of maps indicate how the university sports centre is expected to change after development
Overall, a comparison of two maps shows that the university sports centre is forecasted to witness dramatic changes over the next few years, specifically with respect to the leisure infrastructure.
Looking at the first map in more detail, it can be seen that the central feature of university sports center is a 25m pool. The gym is situated on the Northside and seating on the east side of the pool. there is a reception area in front of the entrance while changing room on the west side of the pool. there are two outdoor courts one of the east side and other of the west side of the map.
The socond map shows that the main feature, seating and changing room of the map will be remain unchanged. The gym will be expanded on the North east corner. there are two outdoor courts will be removed. The sports hall is forecasted next to seating.there are two Dance studio will be built on the eastern side. two of these cafe and changing room is predicted to be constructed on the south east corner of the map. The leisure pool will be built on the west side changing room, sports shop is anticipated to be constructed on the south west corner of the university sports center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: There
...d seating on the east side of the pool. there is a reception area in front of the ent...
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Suggestion: There
...ging room on the west side of the pool. there are two outdoor courts one of the east ...
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Suggestion: There
...l be expanded on the North east corner. there are two outdoor courts will be removed....
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Line 19, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...two outdoor courts will be removed. The sports hall is forecasted next to seating.ther...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'studios'?
Suggestion: studios
...ted next to seating.there are two Dance studio will be built on the eastern side. two ...
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Line 19, column 271, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...ted next to seating.there are two Dance studio will be built on the eastern side. two ...
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Suggestion: Two
...udio will be built on the eastern side. two of these cafe and changing room is pred...
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Line 19, column 320, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this cafe' or 'these cafes', 'these caves'?
Suggestion: this cafe; these cafes; these caves
...ll be built on the eastern side. two of these cafe and changing room is predicted to be co...
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...be built on the west side changing room, sports shop is anticipated to be constru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64782608696 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53092778703 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439130434783 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7553937958 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170705881507 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679757056159 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639177666765 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123028564219 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456849409501 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.