Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.
With the rise in consumerism, it is highly debatable whether money can be given to children or not. Although money can be given as a gift can lead to child personality into money minded and to be devoid of values and relationships, I believe that it is a parental responsibility to teach the millennials about financial management.
Money given as gift will considerably increase the greed of a child and devoid them of relationships and money. When we are allowing children to indulge by our action of giving gift. It may trigger the child into fantasy of money world. This is how adolescents will begin to look at relationships and values in terms of money.
For example: In 2018, survey conducted by the Indian royal society has established the studies based on metro cities that parents pamper their child by gifts and this leads to very unhealthy outlook among them.
Despite the above, handling the money as a gift could teach the teenager a very important component called financial management. It will enable them to handle various economical matters. If children are well-tutored about how to save the money and utilize it effectively, this will assist in making important decisions related to expenses and money saving in later years of adolescent. Furthermore, when they will rise to professional position in a company, by that time, he will be apt in handling the company financially. This is how having the money in a childhood can go a long way in accomplishing the personal as well as financial goals in the lives of a children. For example, Recently study conducted in the “ Indian School of Economics” have collaborated that financial management is an integral component which needs to be taught since childhood.
Eventhough money robs the children of the necessary values, parents must play a important role in teaching their children about the economics and finance which can enable them to handle the money in effective manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05828220859 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93591455325 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0014030448 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986145868797 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419429030582 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340484293206 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607043186539 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382828915739 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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