Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say:
• What is your motivation to learn a new language?
• How can the teacher help you?
• When will you be ready to start?
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in learning French language from you.
I work in a multi-national company as a relationship development, and have to travel to Paris for work. My mentor has recommended me to take French language course from you. I would really like to learn the language as it will help in enhancing my career prospects. Moreover, it will not only help in communication easily in Paris but will also assist me in writing the research report.
I hope you can assist me reading, writing and speaking this language in an easier way, so that I can have a command over the language. Furthermore, I have heard a lot from people that they are very satisfied with learning the language from you as you make things much easier.
I would like to start with my classes from next week as this week I am busy with work in my office. I hope you will be able to start my classes in evening from 5 pm to 6 pm next week.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... evening from 5 pm to 6 pm next week. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, really, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48691099476 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63293010431 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6525559398 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214567664126 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934833264836 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692620960582 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130156606881 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755629545793 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.