You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about some important papers that I might have left in your hotel The Meridian while I was staying there for a conference meeting
I booked a room in your hotel from 22nd September to 23rd September for a conference meeting organised by my company Mckinsey at the Business hall on 23rd September. I was staying in room number 624 and after attending the meeting I checked out from the hotel on 24th September. When I arrived to Delhi, I realised that I left some critical documents in the hotel room, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They are placed in blue folder printed with the name Prabhpreet Kaur on the top.
The official papers are very critical for the company as they contain confidential financial data, hard copy of the presentation and some notes that I registered during the conference. If those documents are misplaced the company will suffer huge losses and it will also affect my job position.
I will be obliged if you could kindly check the room thoroughly and once you discover the documents please give me call at 7844546125. I will personally collect those documents from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours Sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s staying there for a conference meeting I booked a room in your hotel from 22nd ...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at the Business hall on 23rd September. I was staying in room number 624 and afte...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you soon Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8287037037 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5775356421 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.710263295 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304569369447 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108716771172 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687008560786 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155286312882 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642445969746 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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