Essay topics: Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that benefit of this outweighs the problem?
Many students are now finding interest to study in abroad universities. In my personal view, this is a positive sign. Even though there might be some problems involved, those can be solved with minimal effort. In this essay, we are going to discuss the benefits and the problems that might occur in the process and how to overcome them.
The main idea for developing an interest to move to pursue education in foreign countries is might be due to a lack of infrastructure and facilities in their respective countries. Many nations don't have proper universities and procedures to continue their studies in the country they are living in. Keeping problems aside, there are many benefits to the student studying in abroad. First of all, there are high chances of meeting people from various countries helps in increasing the communication and knowing the cultural differences between their countries. Students will have an opportunity to learn new languages and research about the country they are staying in. For example, one of my friends who has done his graduation along with me decided to go to London for his higher studies. After crossing all the hurdles he finally joined in a reputed university. In a very quick time, he learned German and Spanish languages from his fellow students. He was later appointed as an Assistant Professor in the same university by offering him a huge amount of pay which he might not earn in our home country.
Of course, there are few problems in getting a seat in well-known universities outside their place. Getting a University seat is not so easy in terms of fees point of view, but, many banking firms are now offering loans to the students which can be paid back after completion of education. Many countries permit the students to work few hours a week along with their studies. So, students can utilize those opportunities to work and pay back to the bank once they have completed their course. Students now have a lot of tools to interact with their families or friends frequently without missing them. A statistical report from CNBC states, more than 70% of the students who are studying abroad are satisfied with their new lifestyle changes.
To conclude, even though there are many issues involved to move abroad to study in a university, they will have many opportunities to overcome those problems and move forward without hassle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...heir respective countries. Many nations dont have proper universities and procedures...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to go to London for his higher studies. After crossing all the hurdles he finally joi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblems and move forward without hassle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, well, for example, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96517412935 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6700628574 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524875621891 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8696403214 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18716758623 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550092932401 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420255497676 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106770989106 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276165865382 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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