Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that benefit of this outweighs the problem?
Many students are interested to continue their education in foreign universities. In my personal opinion, this is a positive sign. Even though there might be some problems involved, those can be resolved with minimal efforts. In this essay, we are going to discuss the benefits and the problems might occur in the process and how to overcome them.
Students who are interested to study abroad is because of a lack of infrastructure and facilities in their home countries. First of all, meeting people from various countries increases communication and helps to understand the cultural differences between the people. Students will have an opportunity to learn new languages and adaptability. For example, one of my friends decided to go to London for higher studies. After crossing all the hurdles, he joined in a reputed university. He learned German and Spanish languages from his fellow students within six months. He was later appointed as an assistant professor at the same university.
Of course, there are few problems in getting admission in well-known universities outside their place. University study is not so easy in terms of fees, many banking firms are now offering loans to students with less documentation. Almost every country permits the students to work a few hours a week along with their studies. So, students can utilize an opportunity to work and payback to the bank once they have completed their course. Technology now offers a lot of tools to interact with their families or friends frequently without missing them. A statistical report from CNBC states, more than 70% of the students who are studying abroad are satisfied with their new lifestyle changes.
To conclude, even though there are issues for a student to move abroad to study in universities, they will have several opportunities to overcome those problems and move forward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... there might be some problems involved, those can be resolved with minimal efforts. In th...
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...stant professor at the same university. Of course, there are few problems in get...
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...ercome those problems and move forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, for example, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25165562914 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86046913491 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7912267578 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206311297873 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561459784145 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498296962158 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117736971025 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165391105465 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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