In the modern world, with the growing population, various businesses are being opened to fulfill the needs of the people. Owners of these businesses keep opening their shops in the hope of more business coming in. On the one hand, it seems quite necessary and beneficial from the businessmen’s and people’s perspectives, however, on the other hand, it may have some detrimental effects of the lives of business owners. This essay will evaluate the good and bad aspects of this development and will produce a conclusion.
Firstly, every businessman wants their business to be recognized and to fulfill this dream; they don’t mind working extra hours. If the efforts are made in the right direction, they may be fruitful in the long run undoubtedly. Moreover, there are various grocery chains such as 24*7, who have a business model to remain open all the time as per their business requirements and have to fulfill this promise to maintain their customer base. Furthermore, as labor law doesn’t allow anyone to work more than eight hours, businesses who tend to operate longer than this duration, hire more people leading to less unemployment.
Next, though the significance of the business model and to put the extra efforts to grow a business cannot be ignored, staying late at work may have some adverse results in people’s personal lives as well. As some of them are forced to do night shifts, they are more likely to get sick as their immune system also gets affected by the abnormal lifestyle.
Lastly, most of the businessmen start their businesses with a goal to earn money and they want their businesses to spread quickly come hell or high water. However, they should ensure to have a balanced lifestyle and should focus more to do smart work.
In essence, keeping the shops open for a long time isn’t the guarantee of expansion of the business. A business should be true to its model and owners’ should focus on being more productive during the hours they work and to maintain their personal and professional lives in a balanced manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rofessional lives in a balanced manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99712643678 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77750213324 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0475020927 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.214285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0561035452581 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268580337586 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337581825464 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362981428061 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335330619834 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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