Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ngs together for two noticeable reasons.The main class='reason'>reason cl...
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...t the same class='time'>time. this cause people to try focusing on them an...
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
... needed more money in order to subsist. unfortunately, I had to class='work'>work a...
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...;>work in shopping to earn more monemy. this events cause class='me'>me to...
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...e decided to enter the best university. he registered in several extra classes in ...
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...stay up late at the night like nocture. unfortunately, in the end of semester, he failed pass...
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...nstead'>instead of several of them.In conclusion, I personality prefer to cla...
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...itation of class='time'>time. we class='should'>should concent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4502.0 1977.66487455 228% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 10.1396396396 4.8611393121 209% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.600717868 2.67179642975 359% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1224.0 618.680645161 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.51630824373 185% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 127.269967441 48.9658058833 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.739130435 100.406767564 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.043526540992 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261167085474 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317963191503 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043526540992 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 11.7677419355 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -49.33 58.1214874552 -85% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.9 10.1575268817 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.53 10.9000537634 381% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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