Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have faced a lot of works for doing. In the past, they put all their time only for working so they took so much time and as technology had not been developed they did not complain so they correctly did them because they did not spend time for other works like entertainment. But nowadays people cannot manage all their works perfectly, hence I firmly agree that very few works are done well. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my points of view cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that due to lack of the tidy and exact program, they encounter with the lack of time, despite their skills in their jobs, they did unacceptably. In other words, they have to quickly function and it enhances their careless and mistakes. To take a personal experience as an example, I remember when I was a student at university and simultaneously worked, most of the time my boss nagged and alarm me to be more cautious when you calculate.
Another equally noteworthy reason in corroborating this stance is that if you had not had various responsibilities during the day, you would certainly have better performance. It helps to increase your concentration and results in greater quality. Besides, tiredness is one of the main reasons for poor performance and low quality which greatly influences our mood weather to be energetic or not. The results of the study which is conducted in my country show because of the critical situation of the economy people have to spend much of their time in the job place and do diversity job so it has caused the quality of their works drops 40% in comparison to 10 years ago.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that tiredness and lack of time are two important factors that influence the quality of the works. Consequently, it is highly recommended that the government by providing a more relaxed life by paying heed to the public life condition decrease the pressure to enhance the quality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, well, in brief, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79142857143 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80142237925 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0088751044 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152033612323 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044232268607 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366238376174 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769342697512 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457954067562 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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