Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing this letter regarding closure of the beautiful sports and leisure centre in our area, Enfield. I request you to please review your decision of closing this centre as this is the only healthy activity we local residents have in our suburb.
To elucidate, there is almost 1200 homes in our area and this one single sports centre accommodate all of them, from kids to adult, male to female, everyone comes to this centre in their leisure time. Kids out of their school time enjoy indoor games, whereas, adults come to the centre for workout in the great gym which is equipped by the latest workout equipment.
Shutting down of this centre would mean, no more physical and leisure activity, which in turn will increase the frustration in local people, and kids will try to find new activities for their free time and it can go either way.
I hope you will reconsider this case and will immediately halt the decision of closing down our prestigious sports and leisure complex.
Your faithfully,
Jay Cutler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing this letter regarding closure o...
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Suggestion:
...complex. Your faithfully, Jay Cutler
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9209039548 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37672543082 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.965918901 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196541061877 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101933713539 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456048179561 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112288747377 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585422241428 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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