Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
The construction of houses and building should be according to the stringent codes and standards. Some people agree that the responsibility of building homes according to the safety rule Is of the government, whereas, other opine that home owners should ensure that construction is in accordance with the rules. In my opinion, I do believe that both the government and people should be help responsible for following the codes and conducts of constructing buildings.
The government should lay down strict laws for construction and everyone should adhere to the rules. Moreover, the political party in power should hire manpower to continuously monitor construction sites to ensure that all the laws are followed properly. The architecture and building planners should make the drawings of the building according to the code of conducts. To elucidate, several construction standards have been established in earthquake prone and flood prone areas and constant check is done to ensure that the buildings are made as per the rules.
Furthermore, the people and the house owners also have the responsibility to construct offices and houses as per the rule and regulations. Though the government form the rule it the Is the responsibility that people follow them properly and should not construct as per their needs and design. Many of the mishaps happen where the buildings collapse because they are not made as per the standards and as a result many people lost their lives. To exemplify, home owners should ensure that the workers are constructing the building as per the plans given by the architects and there are no flaws.
In my opinion, I vehemently agree that both the individuals and government are equally responsible for marinating the laws and rule of construction and should ensure that they are followed properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... and regulations. Though the government form the rule it the Is the responsibility t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95231825382 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438775510204 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0400564434 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268537339905 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121882939061 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521437096743 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178787772709 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529947791901 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.