about the following topic:
Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that the rate of crime has surged to the alarming point over the period of time. this essay will discuss the most common reasons of criminal activities such as high unemployement and violance shown by media and what steps government can take to control the crimes in cities.
Unfortunately, the more we are going toward the globalisation, the more we are facing the higher unemployement rate, which in turn leads to the increament in crimes. For instance, china has one of the most highest crime rates in the world because of lack of jobs in local people, they are forced to commit crime to overcome their hunger, shoplifting and snatching on the road is very common thing in china. Not only this but today's media is also contributing a major in crimes, as they are promoting violence, usage of guns and other weapons in their movies and dramas. For example, a recent report published in NewYork times states that 80% teenagers move toward crime after getting inspired by the disturbing scenes are shown in the movies.
it is government responsibility to take necessary measures to reduce the crime rates, such as making the laws strict, so people could think twice before committing any crime, regardless of their gender and age. As youngsters always play underage card when they are caught red handed, so it is indespensible to introduce such laws which can also be implimented on juveniles, for example, juvenile jails or long term community work.
To put into a nutshell, it is quite clear that many factors are involved in setting the fire of crime, but the way government can tackle them should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85053380783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65162528031 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0042732702 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.444444444 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177713282224 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683245554129 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422147261133 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103801724306 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433502631845 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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