An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The importance of vitamin A to our health should be spread among people of Tagus so they can help in adopting the new variety of the millet.The government of Tagus should tell their prople that the new variety of the millet have no harm or side effects and it has the same quility as the normal millet becasue people tend to not like change and at first will hesitate and alarmed to the new millet.Since farmers will be paid subsidies they now have a motivition to farm the new variety and speed up its popularity amonge people of Tagus.With the help of farmers and educated people in Tagus the new millet should be poupler among people in no time, and with the increase usage of social media the government should use this stage to promote the the imprtance of vitamin A and the new type of millet. Giving free samples to the people of the new type of millet will speed up it's adoptition among people and help with increase vitamin A among the people.Providing other products that are rich with vitamin A in the market as an alternative of the new millet will help solving the problem.Using schools, TV network and colleges to spread the problem with vitamin A deficiency will be another way to promote the new type. The government may give free lands to farmers to farm the new type only will help alot in providng alot of that type in the market. Taste improve products that have no harm may used to give the new type a beeter taste and smell so children and adults like it more than the old millet type.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1221 1500
No. of Different Words: 120 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.114 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 26.104 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.612 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.612 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.288 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... adopting the new variety of the millet.The government of Tagus should tell their p...
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Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... hesitate and alarmed to the new millet.Since farmers will be paid subsidies they now...
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Line 1, column 538, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...p its popularity amonge people of Tagus.With the help of farmers and educated people...
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Line 1, column 742, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...rnment should use this stage to promote the the imprtance of vitamin A and the new type...
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Line 1, column 742, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...rnment should use this stage to promote the the imprtance of vitamin A and the new type...
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Line 1, column 953, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Providing
...ith increase vitamin A among the people.Providing other products that are rich with vitam...
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Line 1, column 1067, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...alternative of the new millet will help solving the problem.Using schools, TV network a...
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Line 1, column 1087, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Using
...ew millet will help solving the problem.Using schools, TV network and colleges to spr...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.6327345309 25% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 277.0 441.139720559 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4440433213 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37950232296 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43321299639 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 22.8473053892 302% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 268.605658913 57.8364921388 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 307.75 119.503703932 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.25 23.324526521 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425534205136 0.218282227539 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243041917882 0.0743258471296 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11460067093 0.0701772020484 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.425534205136 0.128457276422 331% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.1 14.3799401198 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 48.3550499002 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.8 12.197005988 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.66 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32208582834 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 12.3882235529 428% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 11.1389221557 266% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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