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Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
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- Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others. 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
... personality will build a future leader whos not only aiming to improve their leader...
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Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...a sense of cooperation will improve the leaders communication skills, since you cant &a...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...leaders communication skills, since you cant 'cooperate' if you dont &apos...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e you cant 'cooperate' if you dont 'communicate', and therefore ...
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Line 5, column 953, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... etc. - by involving other parties, and Id argue that cooperation and sharing idea...
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Line 5, column 1085, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...al even faster. Because different minds dont think the same way, and some people mig...
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Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...rk and in life. If sense of competition isnt instilled in our youth, then it will be...
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Line 9, column 389, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ir mind- they are good enough, and they dont need further betterment. Consequentiall...
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Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...uentially, making a leader who not only doesnt aim to better themselves, but also has ...
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Line 9, column 941, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...se cooperation instills selflessness in ones character. In summary, the young g...
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Line 13, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s long as they are taught the concept of all for one and one for all, to balance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, i think, in summary, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17879417879 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22773596707 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49896049896 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7905312844 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.105263158 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3157894737 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261695190574 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784920882428 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550127798973 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134039238135 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961572778085 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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