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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...one of them. 'This life was a dream,' says Kevin without sarcasm. Max was...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...is son played the piano, but he did not took off money from his father, because he k...
^^^^
Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...e, thinking what kind of person he was. Finally he was detained. He made 25 thousand do...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, kind of, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 7.30460921844 397% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 24.0651302605 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55084745763 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40688366156 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6219407824 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1764705882 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55882352941 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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