More and more young people are passionate about computer skills, while it is more and more difficult for old people to keep up with them.
Nowadays, more and more young people are passionate about computer skills, whereas it is more and more difficult for old people to keep up with them.
Firstly, computer skills are important for our century, nevertheless, there are some people who do not use technology; sometimes older people become interested in technology and try to use it. They cannot always do this, for instance, call or write to their friends or children by messengers, they can not always download something that they need, or order something from the online store.
To fix this you need to help them cope with the technique, just as they helped us in childhood with different things. You need to be very patient in their training, because there may be difficulties, or in another way, when their children and friends do not have time, the government can create special courses for this, where all old people can share computer experience with each other.
In conclusion, I would say that old people will have more knowledge about electronics since we or the government help them with this, as this may be necessary in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55265193496 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.158926312 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446487768236 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219387709047 0.084324248473 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.313856801038 0.0667982634062 470% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348945704595 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.364459863559 0.056905535591 640% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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