The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying at IT university from 1985-2015.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying at IT university from 1985-2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides some information about the amount of male and female students studying at university from 1985-2015, and the overall shows over this 35 years period.

According to the graph, there didn't study any female students in the 1985, it is so bad that didn't have any opportunity for female. However amount of male students was 5000. Then after 5 years statistics of female students a bit changed, progressively added for 3000 students, it is great that women started to study. In the 2000 amount of male and female students was tha same, it was about 18000, these statistics were gradually increasing until 2010. In this year women students slumped over from 32000 to 29000, while amount of men students kept increasing. In the end in 2015 the number of male students was higher than female students, it's 40000 of male students and 29000 of female student. it is so great that there added lots of students at university.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
.... According to the graph, there didnt study any female students in the 1985, ...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...students in the 1985, it is so bad that didnt have any opportunity for female. Howeve...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... didnt have any opportunity for female. However amount of male students was 5000. Then ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...amount of men students kept increasing. In the end in 2015 the number of male stud...
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Line 7, column 699, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e students and 29000 of female student. it is so great that there added lots of st...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46769177974 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9878030638 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302868964308 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14101008611 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972374964622 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291762629333 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640179495728 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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