To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To understand the characteristics of a society, we should consider significant cities as well as a small town and countryside. There is some following support for the statement.
First, a significant city is a big city of any country where people from across the country come to do a job or business as they came from a different source of the country they celebrate their festival as well festival celebrated by locals. So major cities of the country are mix with
the culture you may probably understand the culture of the nation, but the majority of people live in a small town and village. To get a brief idea of the county's culture, we should also consider the small town and village.
Second, in big cities, people do a modern job, and big cities are more connected to rest of the world, so it's often seen that people in big cities celebrate some festival which is not part of the country in early days but due to globalization people intrigue towards so-called new festivals. But this does not case with a small town. There are very few people who are not native, and the profession in a small city is also traditional, and the economy of these towns is disconnected to the rest of the world. Let me give you one example of my country, which is India. In India, a small town or village is connected very well to the farming occupation, so they celebrate festivals related to farming, if we compare with big cities, they celebrate Xmas as the festival, which is not a native festival of India.
Third, It is observed that if there are many states in the country, then major cities have a population, which came from the other state of the country as well. It affects the local festival schedule, and as they are major cities, there are many people who came from different countries as well, so it affects culture in good manure. But this was not cased with a small town. Let me give you one more example which suite the above reason, Mumbai is the financial capital of India and many people from the different state came for the search of a job or to do business, so people who came in Mumbai from different state celebrate "chatt puja," "durga puja" like festivals.
In conclusion, Major cities should not consider a mirror of the culture of any nation. We also have to look into a small town, which is also culture-rich land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...or cities of the country are mix with the culture you may probably understand the...
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Line 9, column 646, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...fferent state celebrate 'chatt puja,' 'durga puja' like festivals....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, then, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61520190024 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59571377148 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406175771971 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9335009864 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3125 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869191435578 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348250137171 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429231990671 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553956697391 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335009361901 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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