summarize the point in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points in the passage.
The passage is stating that the Torrrya taxifoha is subjected to extinction.So, experts are trying to propose some solutions to control the danger of extinction.They have considered three ways to do so.However, the professor attitude toward these solutions is negative.She believes that they have not provided satisfactory solutions.So, she rejects each of the solutions.
First of all, the author states that reestablishment of Torrey taxifoha in the same location, but in the coolest and dampest part of the native area. The professor claims that this solution is unlikely to work.She believes that the coolest parts of the area are affected by the other and also, larger parts of the area.Because of the increase in global temperature, these cool areas are getting dryer.As result of this changes the seeds cannot survives the coolest areas.
The second solution is relocate the tree a totally different location.The lecture also reject this idea by providing an example of the black tree that experience the exact similar experiment.As the result of the experiment, although the tree grow better bur it caused other plants to stop growing.So, as you can see there was an unpredictable outcome that shows that this solution doesn't really work.
Finally, the scientists have suggested to preserve the tree in the research centers. In these places they can help the tree to grow in a preserved and monitored situation and provide better consequences.
However, the professor claim that the ability of these trees to survive disease are relatively affected by their population. The larger population, the more possibility of survival.As there is not enough capacity to grow supported by the research labs, consequently the trees wouldn't survive in long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: So
...rya taxifoha is subjected to extinction.So, experts are trying to propose some sol...
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Suggestion: They
...ons to control the danger of extinction.They have considered three ways to do so.How...
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Suggestion: However
...hey have considered three ways to do so.However, the professor attitude toward these so...
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...tude toward these solutions is negative.She believes that they have not provided sa...
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...ave not provided satisfactory solutions.So, she rejects each of the solutions. ...
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... that this solution is unlikely to work.She believes that the coolest parts of the ...
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Suggestion: Because
...ther and also, larger parts of the area.Because of the increase in global temperature, ...
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Suggestion: As
...ure, these cool areas are getting dryer.As result of this changes the seeds cannot...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ure, these cool areas are getting dryer.As result of this changes the seeds cannot...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ol areas are getting dryer.As result of this changes the seeds cannot survives the c...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relocated'.
Suggestion: relocated
...oolest areas. The second solution is relocate the tree a totally different location.T...
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...e the tree a totally different location.The lecture also reject this idea by provid...
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...experience the exact similar experiment.As the result of the experiment, although ...
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... it caused other plants to stop growing.So, as you can see there was an unpredicta...
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Message: “So , as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it caused other plants to stop growing.So, as you can see there was an unpredictable ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e outcome that shows that this solution doesnt really work. Finally, the scientists ...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested preserving'.
Suggestion: suggested preserving
...ly work. Finally, the scientists have suggested to preserve the tree in the research centers. In th...
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Suggestion: As
...ation, the more possibility of survival.As there is not enough capacity to grow su...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e research labs, consequently the trees wouldnt survive in long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35611510791 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96002951892 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 21.2450331126 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.333858604 49.2860985944 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.125 110.228320801 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 21.698381199 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0202813710287 0.272083759551 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00917780547566 0.0996497079465 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159024330661 0.0662205650399 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125374094837 0.162205337803 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156159124553 0.0443174109184 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 53.8541721854 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.7273730684 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.498013245 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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