It cannot be denied that our society is now developing at a unprecedent speed, and with the emerging of the new advanced industries and the propel force of the third industry revolution.
Our life has been more complex than any other periods in human history. In this case, having the ability to organize and plan is a vital skill to today’s people.
To explain why planning and organizing is necessary, we can look into its definition, these two actions, basically means to spilt enormous task into some separated tasks that can be handle with easily. There will be a clear imagine of you work in you mind which can help you prohibit the energy from being scattered and wasted. There is no doubt that you can finish you task more effectively and meticulously after arrangement. I can exemplify this with my own experience, when I was a freshman in college, I always spend a lot of time facing my desktop and just doing nothing, because I didn’t know where should I start. And on the process of doing my work, especially tough assignments, the feeling of tired and anxious always surrounded me, because the work seemed have no end. But after learning how to arrange daily life and study in an elective class, this kind of situation finally disappear. By arranging my work previously, I find I can finish it almost three times as fast as before, and by divided them into serval cushy separated tasks, I can cope it step by step with my confidence.
In addition, another major reason is that arrangement is not just vital to your daily life. In fact it’s an indispensable part of leadership, a essential character you will need if you want to be promoted by your boss. According to a recent research done by university Harvard , nearly in every companies, supervisors tend to promoted the employee who is adept at arranging tasks as the leader of work teams. This is quite reasonable, because how can we expect a man who cannot organize his own work sequentially to be a manger of a team, it would be ridiculous.
So, in conclusion in our modern society, developing the ability to arrange things has been a intellectual investment for us. It can benefit you in all dimensions , be it you daily life or your career.
- The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 71
- Tpo 32 2 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO 36-Independent- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d that our society is now developing at a unprecedent speed, and with the emergin...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ging of the new advanced industries and the propel force of the third industry revolution....
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...;s an indispensable part of leadership, a essential character you will need if yo...
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Line 6, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cent research done by university Harvard , nearly in every companies, supervisors ...
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Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the ability to arrange things has been a intellectual investment for us. It can ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...us. It can benefit you in all dimensions , be it you daily life or your career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646659399 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2196223412 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173332004696 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601088387757 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042749199818 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100786548285 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616307992823 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.