The third technology revolutionary is still exerting it incredible power to our world, and with the high rocketed speed of globalization and the unexpected development of internet. It should be admitted that our society is more dynamic than any other period of history since the birth of the mankind. In this case some people start to be malcontent, because they think their life are even not as good as the people were in the past. From my perspective I agree this kind of idea by a large margin.
The first also the most obvious reason is that our people have to work much harder than before. There are increasing jobs being automated by artificial intelligence since the AI engineering is continuing its headway. And it’s also hard for these who loose jobs to find a new one, since their skills are no longer useful. The prerequisites entailed by companies are changing rapidly. Just take a look at USA, big giants such google and amaze are now striving for auto driving AI, while an enormous amount of drivers especially truck drivers will ultimately find their jobs be automated by robot.
I also want to mention that our living surroundings actually made no progress for several decades. The problem of pollution is getting worse and worse since no government seems to take it into their account. We sacrifice our living surrounding for the development of economy. You can get the statistic of people who have disease of lung and kidney from nearly any search engines. They will eventually tell you what is happening to our planet.
In addition, terrorism is now becoming a conspicuous problem in the background of globalization. The dynamic economy also brings us more conflict between different country, and these countries have became cradles for terrorism, thus finally lead to the increasing number of terrorist strikes happen in our world everyday.
To sum up, I think it’s reasonable for today’s individuals to feel less happy and satisfied about their lives.
- TPO 36-Independent- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 73
- TPO 30 Writing IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 78
- TPO 34Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on a cell phone online games and social networking Web site Use specific reasons and exam 70
- The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 71
- TPO 31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...erent country, and these countries have became cradles for terrorism, thus finally lea...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...f terrorist strikes happen in our world everyday. To sum up, I think it's reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, look, so, still, third, thus, while, i think, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04833836858 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76358928322 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622356495468 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0028343399 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168543229409 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047581739963 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444496743356 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882972214685 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441599143889 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.